ANSWER: Today I
wake up, make coffee, read my emails, and write or edit in my home office. And it’s great! I’ve retired from firing-line
writing—eleven years as a magazine editor, six for a PR firm, twenty-one
running my own marketing communications firm—and now I set my own
schedules.
For the past five
years I’ve been editing for others under the McNairEdits.com name, and
generally I start with that in the morning. I spend afternoons on my WIP and on promotion of my
backlist. Occasionally it occurs
to me that I’m not retired at all, but I love what I’m doing.
QUESTION: Which is
your favorite romance subgenre to read? To write?
ANSWER: I think
sweet romances are my favorites.
In my opinion, the mechanics of sex often get in the way of telling a
good story. That said, I did
recently write and publish a ten-thousand word, super-erotic story, titled “How
the Ensign Got His Wings.” My
computer was smoking when I finished it, and I sneaked it out of the house
without my wife knowing. I’m
constantly looking over my shoulder, hoping it doesn’t find its way back home.
QUESTION: How do
you deal with criticism/rejection?
ANSWER: I handle
it very well, and in fact believe my expertise today is due to
criticism/rejection yesterday. It
can be tough, but writers who can’t handle them aren’t writers for long. And
I’ve learned firsthand that some writers can’t.
Case in
point. I teach an online course
titled “Editor-Proof That Chapter!” in which I work with students individually.
One lesson called for them to develop a hook to open the story, and send the
first few paragraphs to me for comment.
When they arrived I decided to go a step farther, and edited those
paragraphs. Well, that was not
smart of me. Some writers were
incensed that I’d dare do such a thing to their babies, and let me know in no
uncertain terms. These, I’m
afraid, are the writers who will receive nothing but rejection all their
writing life.
QUESTION: What do
you expect from an editor?
ANSWER: I hope
publication editors will help me make the book better, and that usually
happens. I keep an open mind. Yet sometimes I run across one who has
no business being in the business.
My brother, for example,
wrote a book that was accepted and sent to an editor. He waited for months, listening to her reasons for not doing
anything. Finally he was given another editor, and she proceeded to prove her
worth lay elsewhere. Her idea of
editing was to switch the sequence of scenes, for no apparent reason. She explained to a mutual acquaintance,
“I generally edit a book a week.”
Editing is serious
business. Done properly, it takes
time and experience. This is one
of those areas where “you get what you paid for.”
QUESTION: Tell me
about the last book you wrote.
ANSWER: That would
be my how-to, self-editing book, “Editor-Proof Your Writing: 21 Steps to Clear
Prose Publishers and Agents Crave.” It will be published April 1, 2013, by
Quill Driver Books. In it, I tell writers how to improve their work, based my
long writing and editing career.
I wrote it because
I found that most books on self-editing were confusing. They contain a great amount of
knowledge that is not tied into a writer’s real world. They take a shotgun
approach, while this book aims single bullets at easy-to-identify targets in a
student’s own work. While other books cover many of the same topics this one
does, they don’t actually tie these subjects to a writer’s particular
needs. Editor-Proof Your Writing
does, by working with the student’s actual manuscript. I can’t wait for it to
come out!
QUESTION: Tease us
with blurbs or short excerpts from your romance novels.
ANSWER:
Certainly. Here’s a thumbnail of my two latest romance novels.
Mystery at Magnolia Mansion: Brenda Maxwell’s new interior design client tells her to “paint,
wallpaper, whatever” his hundred-year-old landmark mansion, “but for God’s
sake, don’t go overboard.” When she figures her grandiose plans will fit handily
into his edict’s “whatever” section, they’re launched into a constant
head-bumping mode. Brenda’s poor
money management skills (that’s his view, but what does he know?) and lawyer
David Hasbrough’s ridiculous need to control her life (that’s her well-reasoned
evaluation of the situation) combine to keep the battle going. Is this couple’s
romantic goose cooked? Well, she can’t be near him without sparks flying and
goose bumps popping out everywhere.
But that mansion has to be done right!
Mystery on Firefly Knob: When
Erica Phillips visits choice inherited property on a Cumberland Plateau knob
overlooking a beautiful valley, she finds scientist Mike Callahan camped there
to study unique fireflies. She needs to sell it fast to buy a new building for
her antiques business, but he freaks out when a condo builder offers her a
contract. Miffed, she tells him, “If I have my way, this place will be sold
within the week. And, Mr. Callahan, I will have my way!” Their budding romance
plays out before a background of a murder mystery, distrust, and heart-racing
hormones. Will it blossom into a lifetime relationship?
QUESTION: Which is
your favorite character in the books?
Why?
ANSWER: I have to
say that, in both cases, it’s the heroines. They’ve each run into a huge problem in the first pages, and
I’m anxious to see how they resolve them.
When I start a
book I first identify a lead character.
I can see that person, and in some ways have lived with her (or
certainly her clones) all my life.
Once I find her I play the “what if” game. What if she has to find a new place of business, and
something stands in the path? What if she finds the perfect home to renovate,
and its owner thinks all it needs is a good paint job? That character and I write the story
together, and by the end we are very good friends and know each other’s quirks,
loves, problems, and hang-ups. Or at least I know hers.
QUESTION: What are
you working on right now?
ANSWER: I have
another romance cooking, but my editing for others is on the front burner. I find myself immersed in the dishes
the author is serving, and completely involved in adding the seasonings that
will make it fit for the king. I
guess this comes from my forty-year career of writing for others.
QUESTION: Your
biggest piece of advice to aspiring novelists?
ANSWER: Don’t
be too proud of your first work. Edit it to within an inch of its death, show
it to critique partners and seriously consider their reactions, and edit some
more. When you’ve finally finished
the manuscript have an experienced editor look it over before sending it to a
publisher or publishing it yourself.
As a fiction
editor working through an editing network, I’ve seen hundreds of novels written
by writers who are confident their work is top quality. While a handful are almost ready to go, eighty percent need heavy editing, and most
of the rest, at least light editing.
The rest are simply not editable.
Remember: The
manuscripts I see are by writers who realize their work might not be the best
it could be, and have asked for help.
The rest send their work directly to agents and publishers, and most
will get them back with a nice note thanking them for their interest. They won’t know what mistakes they’re
making, and for the rest of their lives will make the same ones, producing
manuscript after manuscript that will find their way back to them. A professional editor can tell you what
you’re doing wrong and short-circuit the process. I’m hoping Editor-Proof Your Writing will help new writers
solve problems before sending their manuscripts out to publishers and agents.
QUESTION: Where
can readers find you?
ANSWER: My website
is http://DonMcNair.com, and my email
address is dwmcnair@gulftel.com.
BOOK ONE
MYSTERY AT MAGNOLIA MANSION
By
Don
McNair
BLURB:
Brenda
Maxwell’s new interior design client tells her to “paint, wallpaper, whatever”
his hundred-year-old landmark mansion, “but for God’s sake, don’t go
overboard.” When she figures her grandiose plans will fit handily into his
edict’s “whatever” section, they’re launched into a constant head-bumping mode.
Brenda’s
poor money management skills (that’s his view, but what does he know?) and
lawyer David Hasbrough’s ridiculous need to control her life (that’s her
well-reasoned evaluation of the situation) combine to keep the battle going. Is
this couple’s romantic goose cooked? Well, she can’t be near him without sparks
flying and goose bumps popping out everywhere. But that mansion has to be done
right!
NOTE:
Don McNair actually lived in this house, and did the very things to it that he
has heroine Brenda Maxwell do.
EXCERPT:
He
kept staring at her. “Stained glass? New patio? Do you have any other
surprises?”
If
this conference room had a grandfather clock, she thought, you could hear it
big time. Tick . . . tock . . . tick . . . tock . . .
“Well
. . .” she said.
“Well,
what?”
“Well
. . . no. No more surprises. Except—except for your new office suite.”
“Aha!”
Startled,
she looked up. “What? Aha what!”
He
took giant strides to his chair, but remained standing. She watched him flex
his fingers. Open . . . closed . . . open . . . closed . . . tick . . . tock .
. . tick . . . tock . . .
“And
that gorgeous desk,” she said. “You’ll really like that desk, David. We’ll put
it in your new office suite. It has brass handles, and fancy ormolu, and—and
it’s more than a hundred years old!
Almost two hundred!”
He
stared at her, mouth open, saying nothing.
She
frowned. “We’ll have to bring it in through the upstairs window, though. It’d
never make that turn on the stairs. I guess we’ll have to hire a crane or
something.”
“Office
suite,” he muttered. “New patio.” He plopped into his chair. “Stained glass . .
.”
“Think
about it, David. Right now, at home you’re working at a kitchen table. But if
you decide to move down here permanently—”
“Hire
a crane . . .”
BOOK
TWO
MYSTERY ON FIREFLY KNOB
By
Don
McNair
BLURB:
When
Erica Phillips visits choice inherited property on a Cumberland Plateau knob
overlooking a beautiful valley, she finds scientist Mike Callahan camped there
to study unique fireflies. She needs to sell it fast to buy a new building for
her antiques business, but he freaks out when a condo builder offers her a contract.
Miffed, she tells him, “If I have my way, this place will be sold within the
week. And, Mr. Callahan, I will have my way!”
Their
budding romance plays out before a background of a murder mystery, distrust,
and heart-racing hormones. Will it blossom into a lifetime relationship?
EXCERPT:
Mike
stepped aside, and she saw a clearing. The treetop canopy opened to let in
sunlight and blue sky. Grass, kept at bay by constant shadows in the deep woods,
covered an open area the size of an average yard. Weeds and wildflowers
sprinkled the ground, and sapling maples and vines fringed the woods.
“This
is it?” she said.
“Yep.
The original site. See if you can spot where the cabin stood.”
She
saw nothing but the woods and grass. To her left she noticed a stone
outcropping. Beyond it was blue sky, and the hazy distance of Sequatchie
Valley.
“Why,
we’re right at the knob’s edge,” she said.
“That’s
right. If you jumped off that big rock you’d fall almost two thousand
feet."
As
she approached the rock she gazed about the clearing. And then she saw it—a
vertical stone chimney that at first glance resembled the tall trees
surrounding it. Now she made out its individual stones. She stepped closer and
saw beneath it the stone foundation of a one-room cabin. The chimney rose from
one corner, with its hearth opening toward the center. She stared at it in awe.
It was the precursor of the cabin her father lived in. Perhaps it was even
built by Rymer himself, the knob's namesake, in the early eighteen hundreds.
The
sun's slanting rays streamed through the tree canopy and threw light patterns
on the chimney and foundation. She touched Mike’s arm. “It’s like a shrine,”
she whispered. “I feel like I’ve just stepped out of a time machine.”
AUTHOR INFORMATION:
Don McNair, now a
prolific fiction writer, spent most of his working life editing magazines (11
years), producing public relations materials for the Burson-Marsteller
international PR firm (6 years), and heading his own marketing communications
firm, McNair Marketing Communications (21 years). His creativity has won him
three Golden Trumpets for best industrial relations programs from the Publicity
Club of Chicago, a certificate of merit award for a quarterly magazine he wrote
and produced, and the Public Relations Society of America’s Silver Anvil. The latter is comparable to the Emmy
and Oscar in other industries.
McNair has written and
placed hundreds of trade magazine articles and three published non-fiction
“how-to” books (Tab Books). He’s also written six novels; two young-adult
novels (Attack of the Killer Prom Dresses
and The Long Hunter), three romantic
suspense novels Mystery on Firefly Knob, Mystery at Magnolia Mansion, and
co-authored Wait for Backup!), and a romantic
comedy (BJ, Milo, and the Hairdo from
Heck).
McNair now concentrates
on editing novels for others, teaching two online editing classes (see
McNairEdits.com), and writing his next romance novel.
Don will giving away reader's choice of a copy of one of his books on http://www.donmcnair.com/ to one randomly chosen commenter. Follow the tour and comment; the more you comment, the better your chances of winning. The tour dates can be found here: http://goddessfishpromotions.blogspot.com/2012/06/virtual-book-tour-mcnair-mysteries.html
Thank you for hosting Don today.
ReplyDeleteThanks for having me on. I enjoyed the enterview process… and your graciousness as a host!
ReplyDeleteHi Don! I must just chime in here, Rachel, and say Don's online course is absolutely fabulous. I still use the notes every single manuscript I write to defog them!
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